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I am from lies,
scripted and not.

I am from tragedy
as the years rolled past.
Smiling, pretending,
I learned my lives.

I am from imagination,
something required as I lived yet another
while a red monster taught us addition.

I’m from heritage,
A Celtic mystery
that may include Scotland.

I’m from anomalies,
unique to the hood.
Always covered, never bared.

I’m from religion unproved.
Catholic no longer,
a bare cathedral a biblical tomb
beneath ten laws never learned.

I’m from friendly reap,
even fish eventually drown.
Zeus, Zoey, an alerting chime,
possibly the murderous Casey.

Beside the Court, beside my house,
stood a wooden home.
A hide away of secret escapes
before a fateful fall.

I am not from the cuts,
but rather thousands of Band-Aids.
The torn paraded with forgotten friends.
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Author's Comments

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I -kindanotreallysomewhatsortofsemidisownin glypartially- like it [good luck separating those words but it shouldnt be THAT hard~].
Anyway, this is the poem I had to do in English. We had to have the exact number of lines as this freaking example. That's why I put it under 'fixed'. I hated writing this. And I don't care for it much at all.
But yeah, enjoy -_-

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:iconavesetsuna:
.....the last line made me so sad, Seicha....Iluuuu....

:iconcreaturelover00::iconavesetsuna: <3


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Jon-Paul says: "You get to the end of Ocean's 12 and you realize the whole movie is just convoluted and pointless."
Aki says: "Kind of like Happy Feet?"
Jon-Paul says: "No, no... Happy Feet was a sin."
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XD
Why?
And I ilu tu

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:iconsaphire88:
It's great! Especially the last stanza...

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<3
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What's so great about it?
[curious in case I write more poetic stuffs]

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:iconsaphire88:
Um... well... I don't really know how to describe it... Just how it flows so nicely and has a whole sort of bittersweet mood to it... If that makes an sense...

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It does. Ilu Saphidae <3

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^^ That was written rather nicely. I'd like to see more poetry from you~.

My favorite stanza was as follows:
"I’m from religion unproved.
Catholic no longer,
a bare cathedral a biblical tomb
beneath ten laws never learned."

Primarily, it's because it reminds me of something I may write, something I believe and how I see my spiritual transformation. My favorite lines from your poem were the last two of the above stanza because it reminds of hypercritic religious zealots. =O Oh'shiz.
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XD
I not much of a religious person <3
And tankuu. I suppose I could do more poetry.

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